Paralyzed Soul

Love is not for the weak, so they say.
Well the person I know is very weak,
yet he dared to love
and now he is all messed up.
I blame you, but no one else.
He used to be a happy boy
and you were all he talked about.
Now every time he says your name,
you can see sadness in his eyes.
He is alive yet dead.
Thank you for killing my friend.

Author: Jennifer Kesewa

COMMENTS (3)

BENJAMIN QUARM | 12/9/2009 6:57:40 PM

THE LADIES SHOULD READ, MEMORISE AND USE THE ESSENTIAL FACTORS IN THIS POAM. SOME LADIES ARE CRUEL. "STOP THE DOUBLE GAME". CHEERS

kay | 1/18/2010 9:30:24 PM

i pray he/she found a new love

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lolly | 5/26/2011 9:08:53 PM

this is a very touching poem i hope he soons finds he feet and sadles back onto the rocky horse.

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